What would you tweak on this diet for quick weight loss and muscle building?

DIET
No sugar!
No bread! (Limited)
No potatoes or anything deriving from it!
No flour like cookies, cheez its
(crackers)
No candy!
No pasta!
Lots of water!
Eat often (small amounts) (good food)
Protein shakes or meal replacement shakes!

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